Fort Nar Shadda, The Jewel of Dantooine

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Post by Durza Apoxxis » Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:47 pm

what planet is nar shadaa on

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Post by Patience' » Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:48 am

Dantooine. NE of the Mining Outpost.

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Post by Mikal » Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:18 am

Waucod Meesman wrote:I was in town today just wandering around and I have to say that it is very well organized and is very nicely decorated. Great Work Daiho!


Waucod is playing again? Geez, Kurke and I need to log in and get our city back :roll:
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Post by Kurke_Aumea » Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:40 pm

haha!

yeah... just bought a house, so it's kind of occupying my time... lol
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Post by Arev » Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:42 pm

Mikal wrote:
Waucod Meesman wrote:I was in town today just wandering around and I have to say that it is very well organized and is very nicely decorated. Great Work Daiho!


Waucod is playing again? Geez, Kurke and I need to log in and get our city back :roll:


Hey! When are you coming back?
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Post by Mikal » Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:49 pm

As soon as I find a place to live that has Broadband, or else when TOR comes out, whichever comes first...only I would be in TOR if it was first hehe.
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Post by Daiho » Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:52 pm

Daiho wrote:Hey guys! What do you think about my new ad?

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Is there any mistakes in my ad? Would like to look professional!

thanks

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Post by Arev » Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:16 pm

Spelling/Grammar-wise, you're fine. But, if I can could offer some advice I would change the location of some of the words.

Try:
Please/Come Visit!
815 4500 Dantooine
Contact DAIHO for more information (or: Questions? Ask DAIHO!)

And then put Starsider underneath City Network.

Just some friendly advice.
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Post by Mikal » Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:58 pm

When I see this poster, I wonder if they just opened a Red Lobster on Dant or something, but meh, that's just me and my fish fry crazy self :P But ya, it looks pretty cool.
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Post by Daiho » Fri Sep 18, 2009 10:16 am

Fort Nar Shadda is looking for a Sith Mediatation Room.

Contact me if you would like to come live in the greatest city of Dantooine.

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Post by Daiho » Fri Sep 18, 2009 10:23 am

Arev wrote:Spelling/Grammar-wise, you're fine. But, if I can could offer some advice I would change the location of some of the words.

Try:
Please/Come Visit!
815 4500 Dantooine
Contact DAIHO for more information (or: Questions? Ask DAIHO!)

And then put Starsider underneath City Network.

Just some friendly advice.


What do you think about that?

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Post by Arev » Fri Sep 18, 2009 10:41 am

Hehe, I meant by Please/Come Visit, I meant either Please Visit or Come Visit. :)

Also, maybe you might want to put a little more space between City Network and Starsider, or just make Starsider smaller.

Other than that, looks great!
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Post by Waucod Meesman » Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:33 pm

I bet Arev sat there and stared at the picture for an hour and was turning his head and all that junk...
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Post by Arev » Thu Oct 29, 2009 10:12 pm

Wanted to mention that if a few days a week FNS is wonderfully decorated with Storyteller props thanks to Red-Dawn/TK-162.
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